Please critique my personal statement

[Bikini Princess]

PM me if you want to critique my personal statement, and I'll send you a PM of the statement.

Please be as harsh as you can!! And pretend you are an adcom member.

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[CaNEM]

I PMed you about the statement!

 

[marq_bme]

i pmed you mine. feel free to send me yours

 

[Bikini Princess]

Thank you so much!!! for all of those who commented on my PS - your advice was excellent!!!